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Apr 19, 2007 17:03:17 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 19, 2007 17:03:17 GMT -5
I am the Earth The one you parade as does every other person and I'm starting to fade.
I am the River the one that flows free. all marvel at my mystique All I do is just be me.
I am the Sun A beauty to show Everyone fears, loves, and hates me But how would I know?
I am the Breeze so careless and wild. I'll play with you any time. I'm only but a child.
I am Myself. I love just how It doesn't matter what you think because, hey, no changing me now. Short, yeah, but I was just in that mood where I was thinking, Why does the world have to be so discrimitory? Anyway, another work by Furle!
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Apr 19, 2007 17:20:55 GMT -5
Post by Uesugi on Apr 19, 2007 17:20:55 GMT -5
I like your poem... Nice flow to it... Shorter ones are sometimes good, as well.
On the issue of stereotypes/discrimination: ... Actually, no, I won't say anything, for fear of a liberal avalanche...
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Apr 19, 2007 18:06:22 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 19, 2007 18:06:22 GMT -5
I agree that the issue of discrimination is a delicate one, and it's just one of those things that falls into the 'politically correct/incorrect' catagory... I hate that catagory... =_=
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Apr 19, 2007 18:55:07 GMT -5
Post by me on Apr 19, 2007 18:55:07 GMT -5
I usually blow that category wide open then wave at the wreckage as it passes by.
Nice poem! Finally one thats uplifting instead of depressing!
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Apr 20, 2007 7:30:22 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 20, 2007 7:30:22 GMT -5
No kidding! A lot of poems are all gothic or emo or whatever anymore.
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Apr 20, 2007 11:48:36 GMT -5
Post by me on Apr 20, 2007 11:48:36 GMT -5
I guess its because its hard to write a poem while in a good mood =_=
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Apr 23, 2007 20:38:49 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 23, 2007 20:38:49 GMT -5
too true, too true... most of my best work is produced from a rainy day... interesting.
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Apr 23, 2007 20:59:09 GMT -5
Post by me on Apr 23, 2007 20:59:09 GMT -5
Your Emo you just dont know it =_=
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Apr 23, 2007 21:48:34 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 23, 2007 21:48:34 GMT -5
No I'm not! If you care to look, my wrists are scar free, save for cat bites from long before the term 'emo' was though of. Besides, rain is inspiring. ^-^
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Apr 23, 2007 21:56:31 GMT -5
Post by me on Apr 23, 2007 21:56:31 GMT -5
You know I used to cut myself....and I have no scars
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Apr 24, 2007 7:42:50 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 24, 2007 7:42:50 GMT -5
Still... I'm not emo, I'm not turning emo, and I personally dislike the whole labeling thing. That's why I ended with 'I am Myself.' Labels stand no chance with me. ^-^
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Apr 24, 2007 8:58:06 GMT -5
Post by me on Apr 24, 2007 8:58:06 GMT -5
*Whispers* Darn...we must get bigger labels!
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Apr 24, 2007 16:10:50 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 24, 2007 16:10:50 GMT -5
I take that back. Campbell's Soup is the bestest label of all! I love that one!
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Apr 24, 2007 16:34:01 GMT -5
Post by me on Apr 24, 2007 16:34:01 GMT -5
No you have been labeled....um...the marketing departmen tneeds to go home and find a label....till then your a goldfish!
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Apr 24, 2007 17:45:24 GMT -5
Post by Disaster <3 on Apr 24, 2007 17:45:24 GMT -5
A...Goldfish..? surely you, an author with 645 posts here should have more imagination than that! >.>
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