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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 22, 2006 4:21:36 GMT -5
If the lazer makes alot of noise, or drains its energy quickly than I pick A... but if its silent, and has plenty of energy left over to be used again... Then B.
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 4:31:31 GMT -5
It doesn't matter if its quiet...noone but your people are there. Plus he will scream....Depending on how sadistic I get it could use from 1/4 of the energy to need several more batteries....
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 22, 2006 4:36:38 GMT -5
Lazer his ass.. Mwahahahaha
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 4:38:16 GMT -5
My thought exactly...I mean why give him a fighting chance.
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 4:49:54 GMT -5
Nothing could be better then the hiss of a laser to terrorize whomever you wanted.
The first beam cut off his middle finger. Screams followed soon after. When his gang had first heard them they had immediately rushed in. Now the torture had turned into a bizarre spectator sport.
Already over a hundred pieces of his rivals body littered the floor, and you hadn't even gotten past the elbow. When you finally did sever the elbow something occurred to him. Why waste time on the unimportant things in life. You immediately sent a blast into the mans crotch. What fell off was laughable even if the laser had burned most of it off. Next the ears fell burning to the ground. A smile spread over your features.
Several batteries later only a mutilated tors and head remained. The still breathing enemy was only alive because of a last minute move to the medical facility. All that remained was his...well now its, torso were the lungs and heart. Thousands of machines now kept him alive and conscious. Till finally you cut a little to deep into its face, and your enemy was no more.
Disappointed you grabbed a new battery to replace your nearly empty one and pondered your next move. The bandits would probably head back to base, if only to grab essentials.
A)Try to ambush a numerically superior force that is probably weary from fighting, yet still packs more firepower then you. B)go to the city and hope they are still there, and hit them from behind....after hiding the illegal weapons. C)Kill them at the city who cares if your weapons are illegal. Kill anyone who trays to take them away.
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 22, 2006 5:15:22 GMT -5
B
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 22, 2006 15:17:52 GMT -5
C
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 15:21:28 GMT -5
ok going to try and wait for one more vote...
1 for B 1 for C
if we don't get a vote in time Im going with B
So it is still 1 for B 1 for C
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Post by uesugi on Oct 22, 2006 15:29:56 GMT -5
I'll go C.
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 15:32:50 GMT -5
C it is.... Ill post it in a couple seconds.
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 15:44:53 GMT -5
"Lets go kill some bandits."
With those words a cheer rose throughout your gang. You figured that since you'd be heroes, you'd get special treatment. At the very least you could "discourage" anyone who tried to take your weapons away.
Later you had arrived at a war torn citadel. Luckily the bandits hadn't gotten any further, unfortunately there were barely any militia left. The bandits were also depleted, but they still out numbered your gang two to one.
With a war cry that could shatter the mountains themselves, your gang charged into the bandit help territory. The first group you met were instantly bisected by the powerful weapon in your hands. Stooping over you picked up the much newer, and more powerful pulse laser. With a grin on your face once again the fight began.
It was a massacre, the militia had only one man left, but your gang had gotten through with only a single casualty. He would recover though so in reality your gang was unscathed. The bandits had been eliminated, and now the gangs were the dominant force in the citadel. You were at their head, you were on top of the world with all the privileges it brought.
Clambering through the wreckage you stepped forward to claim your prize. Power.
A)Keep going (yes I can) B) Stop you pregnant dog!!!!! (same to you) C) stop you good writer (why thank you) D)Make a different one!!!
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 22, 2006 18:28:33 GMT -5
ermmm....A. I dont meen to be mean. but this was very short and unorganized. However, the length of a story doest determine the scoreIt seemed to go like this. " The gang ran in and killed everybody, and they won. the end." I meen, no plot twists, not much detail.....this is just me though, i didnt like it. There was hardly no developed story, and ended as quickly as it began. Again, i dont meen to be harsh, just my opinion.
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 18:45:40 GMT -5
Nah its OK. My first time doing a cyoa so it was mostly a learning expierience. Dont worry in the continuation I'll try to put in all the things I was to lazy to this time...
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Post by poo on Oct 22, 2006 19:18:41 GMT -5
A. I love this.
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Post by me on Oct 22, 2006 19:19:45 GMT -5
Ok expect it shortly...
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