Raistlin
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I'm tired.
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Post by Raistlin on Oct 5, 2006 14:20:26 GMT -5
Another Suggestion: Vote on my CYOA. or tell me it sucks. Please!
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Post by RareCarpet on Oct 17, 2006 14:16:31 GMT -5
CHEESE good job
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Post by saleenstang on Oct 27, 2006 16:18:29 GMT -5
good story. one thign i notice you start off alot of sentences with some type of action or emotion or something and you put a comma then continue the sentence (sighing softly, continue) (hesitantly, continue) etc, its not a bad thing or anything its just a repetitive way of starting a sentence but still, i love your story
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Post by dansanman on Nov 2, 2006 17:53:30 GMT -5
You got the link to the Lucifer Story? I misplaced it.
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