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Post by Maliku on Feb 3, 2007 0:53:23 GMT -5
Heh, I love your writing style.
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Post by OGRenderence on Feb 3, 2007 21:57:08 GMT -5
The next battle is to big to comprehend. It'll take awhile.
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Post by Umaril on Feb 4, 2007 9:59:44 GMT -5
Are you going to post more than ten lines this time?
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Post by OGRenderence on Feb 4, 2007 10:13:13 GMT -5
Are you going to insult me on my stories now? Because I won't take that.
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Post by DEATH97 on Feb 4, 2007 10:20:59 GMT -5
It was borderline, but I'm giving him the benifit of the doubt. Could of been just asking a legitamate question. Your updates do tend to be short. They are very well written but short. I've caught up with what you got here so far Ogre, its fine work as usual. I can't wait to see this battle that is coming.
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Post by Umaril on Feb 4, 2007 10:23:16 GMT -5
I never said it wasn't good Karn, it is, but it's awfully short.
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Post by OGRenderence on Feb 4, 2007 10:39:53 GMT -5
I always make it short.
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Post by DEATH97 on Feb 4, 2007 11:05:14 GMT -5
Yeah, alot of people prefer reading short posts, especially for those with short attention spans, which are probably most of us here. I prefer short posts, just as long as they are frequent. If I'm only given one update in several days then I like longer posts so I get more. Ogre has his own thing, and it works.
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Post by OGRenderence on Feb 4, 2007 11:12:35 GMT -5
I said stop calling me Ogre. Call me OGRen if you have to make my name smaller. I'll update this soon. As in today.
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Post by DEATH97 on Feb 4, 2007 11:41:29 GMT -5
Sorry "OGRen"
*awaiting a future update*
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Post by OGRenderence on Feb 4, 2007 11:59:43 GMT -5
An Imperial Forester looked over Bravil's walls and stared at the surrounding wilderness. He ducked his head back down and shook his head at the Bravil Guards that sat nearby. "Nothing yet." He said. The guards grew worried again. They were always worried in the after noon. Just before the vampires would come out and attack.
Bartho looked out from the covered hole he and his men were hiding in. "We'll have them so confused tonight. They won't know what hit their rear!" Bartho said with glee.
OGWren looked around the now covered tower. So many of his Vampire soldiers had fit into this place. He looked down at Fathis Aren's corpse and asked, "Mind if we attack Bravil from your tower? No? Well that's excellent. Thanks corpsy."
The sun started to set.....
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Post by DEATH97 on Feb 4, 2007 12:05:50 GMT -5
Nice. That last line made me laugh. "corpsy"
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Post by Maliku on Feb 4, 2007 12:10:49 GMT -5
Haha, that last line made me laugh too. Heh, corpsy.
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Post by OGRenderence on Feb 4, 2007 12:52:43 GMT -5
Good for you guys.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Feb 4, 2007 12:59:38 GMT -5
Nice update ogren. Getting closer.
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