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Post by Delta1212 on Oct 4, 2006 18:46:58 GMT -5
Can I submit non-consecutive pieces of a story? There is more written for the one I posted but I didn't write a piece to connect them.
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Post by Pentium Evil on Oct 5, 2006 4:58:11 GMT -5
I'll submit my Oblivion fan fic 'Rage and Silencer' it should be finished within a week.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 5, 2006 17:40:12 GMT -5
sweet.
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 5, 2006 17:43:42 GMT -5
All the submitted work is being reviewed by judges but and the final chance to submit something will be October, 21.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 5, 2006 17:47:31 GMT -5
I we should come up with a date, and stick with it. At this rate, there will never be a deadline!
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 5, 2006 17:50:39 GMT -5
Fixed it in my post
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 5, 2006 17:53:38 GMT -5
dude, what up with yourr karma? -1,337. Dang!
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 5, 2006 17:54:09 GMT -5
I am anti-1337(LEET)
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 5, 2006 17:54:59 GMT -5
say what?
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Oct 5, 2006 17:56:18 GMT -5
holy crap how did you get -1337 karma. Doesn't 1337 stand for geek or nerd or something like that?
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 5, 2006 17:57:02 GMT -5
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Post by GreyEidolon on Oct 5, 2006 19:46:29 GMT -5
Varika gazed airily at the dying embers in the fire before her. Despite being, exhausted she could not bring herself to sleep. It had been a long day, a long,tiring day filled with running and hiding and lying-the kinds of things criminals did. But she was no criminal.
I am a runaway.-she mused-I am free...
"You need your rest, my Lady." Said a man standing across the fire pit. His back was to Varika, and he stared deeper into the woods in wich they took refuge. He was a massive man- easily seven feet tall. His shoulders were broad, and he had an overall stalwart apperance, accentuated by the dark grey plate mail he was wearing.
"We are far away from the manor now, Uthro, you can call me by my first name." Returned Varika.
"T'would be much too informal, my lady."
"Informal was not only allowing me to run away, but helping me to do so, and accompanying me on my journey." She said with a weary smile.
After a brief pause Uthro sighed deeply and turned around. He sat down on a log in front of the fire and rested his chin on his hands, closing his eyes.
"You are my charge." He said. " I am honorbound to serve and protect you and you alone. I have never sworn fealty to either of your parents."
His eyes remained closed as he spoke. Varika thought he looked as though he had been reciting the words, as if he had said them before. They were nonetheless comforting.
"You didn't have to come with me." She said quietly.
Uthro stood up slowly
"Yes I did." He said. "For both our sakes."
Varika stood up, walked around the fire and embraced the armor clad man.
"Thank you." She said.
He put one massive arm around her and sighed again. But the short-lived, peaceful moment was shattered by a shrieking noise. Startled, Varika jumped back and looked around for the source of the sound. Uthro unsheathed his sword and turned back toward the woods.
"Get near the fire." He said
A dimunitive humanoid creature revealed itself, lunging from behind a bush. Varika recognized it immediatly as a goblin- green skin, a long crooked nose, and large ragged ears. It was wearing some random bits of armor and wielded a crude-looking blade.
"Must be a stray, there are more and more of these every week." Said Uthro as the ugly creature ran towards him, still screaming. He shifted into an attack-ready stance.
When it apparently thought it was in striking distance, it jumped at Uthro, sword pointed at his face. Uthro stepped forward with suprising grace and brought the hilt of his own sword down the creatures bare skull. It made a sputtering noise and fell abrubtly to the ground, blood pouring from it's head creating a hideous rosette were it came to rest.
"Are you alright?" Uthro asked Varika.
"I'll be fine, but that kind of thing takes some getting used to."
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 5, 2006 19:56:07 GMT -5
wow really good. I can't wait to read more.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Oct 5, 2006 19:57:14 GMT -5
I'm going to create a thread in the writing section for my story. I'm not saying the judges have to look there, or that you care, but I felt like I should tell you.
I apologize for the double post.
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Post by Delta1212 on Oct 5, 2006 19:59:12 GMT -5
*exalts Loki*
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