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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 27, 2006 20:06:47 GMT -5
Flesh and blood splattered the ground as the chains cut the skin. The chains stopped and the Ork's body feel to the ground, dead. Just like all heretics should be. Jamison raised his Chain Sword above his head and yelled the Space Marine's victory to the skies. He was the only one left now..... The rest of his Chapter was dead.....
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Post by fallingfar on Nov 27, 2006 20:57:19 GMT -5
It's not taht long theres not ehough written to really comment
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Post by DEATH97 on Nov 27, 2006 22:12:48 GMT -5
I agree its too short to get much out of it, but its interesting non the less. I'd like to see more.
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 28, 2006 7:55:37 GMT -5
I made it small for a reason.
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Post by uesugi on Nov 28, 2006 22:53:14 GMT -5
Why aren't you continuing A Thief's Tale? ;_;
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 29, 2006 8:55:28 GMT -5
Because I'm evil and I'm mean. I'll try working on it. My nose was bleeding yesterday and I was sick on Monday.
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Post by me on Nov 29, 2006 17:13:18 GMT -5
to bad you dont have more writing up...
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 29, 2006 17:16:03 GMT -5
Yea..... To many ideas trying to get my attention first.....
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Post by me on Nov 29, 2006 21:35:49 GMT -5
problems sticking with one?
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 29, 2006 22:10:27 GMT -5
No. To many ideas for each story.
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 29, 2006 22:30:13 GMT -5
Jamison had once been the best Sargent of the Blood Runners, but the assassination of it's leader lead to Jamison's promotion. The Vindicare Assassin's head was cut off by Jamison's Chain-Sword. Brother-Captain Davian Thule took the killing as an omen. An omen that meant that Jamison would because the new Brother-Captain of the smaller Blood Runners.
The new Brother-Captain took his new duty with pride, and tried his best to stay with-in orders. He helped take an area quicker then planed thanks to his devotion. But this ended quickly when he was ordered to attack the Necrons. Davian tried to stop the Console from making this bad decision, but the Console was determined to send the Blood Runners there to stop the devastating attacks that were forthcoming.....
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