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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 14, 2007 21:41:59 GMT -5
Well I am currently writing a short story or novella(Not sure which yet) and I will post the first Chapter soon until then her is a littler teaser.
“I don’t see the world like everyone else, I see everything others do but I am able to see everything in between too; the demons, angels, hells, and heavens. Everyone is so ignorant to the secrets that lie in between our world, if only they could see what I see, experience what I experience.” -Vallen the Crazed
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 18, 2007 23:06:23 GMT -5
Just posting to say I have not abandoned this and it is still in the works, however it will probably be awhile.
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Post by me on Oct 19, 2007 1:11:37 GMT -5
OK then, I am waiting...
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Oct 19, 2007 21:46:22 GMT -5
Same here
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 19, 2007 23:26:10 GMT -5
I am thinking about rewriting the whole first section or getting rid of it all together. However some good news I pretty much have the whole storyline fleshed out and decided that this will probably end up being a fairly long short story that introduces the character and the story's world(Which is technically Earth but with a few twists).
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Oct 24, 2007 20:56:46 GMT -5
Still working on it, decided to scrap the whole thing and start over because I wasn't satisfied with it plus my grades have been on the decline so I have to focus on them before the story.
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Post by me on Oct 24, 2007 21:37:24 GMT -5
Well, then it will be a long wait for it
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Post by Disaster <3 on Oct 24, 2007 21:43:48 GMT -5
I pretty much have the whole storyline fleshed out and decided that this will probably end up being a fairly long short story. Hmm, oxymoron... Can't wait to read it, Loki!
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Nov 16, 2007 1:15:54 GMT -5
I am still working on it(I have a rough draft that is currently farther than any of my other attempts), but I want to hone my skills a little bit with a side story that will probably end up subtely tying in with In Between. And I need your help.
(This is a copy and paste from another one of my posts on another website so that is why is sounds a little weird) It isn't much but I currently working on a story that involves escaping a strange government facility that is like a prison. Before his escape the main character is interrogated a few times by different people. The thing I could use some help with is I want to make the interrogators have unique characteristics that gives a slightly funny nickname(You never learn their real names the whole story). The reason I want to do this is because I created a character that is missing all his fingers except his middle finger and his thumb whose nickname during the interrogations is Mr. ****-Off. Then I decided to continue the theme, I just can't really think of any more clever ideas.
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