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Tears
Feb 1, 2007 20:34:47 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 1, 2007 20:34:47 GMT -5
Krome knelled in a shallow puddle and gazed along the ridge. Nothing, still. No enemy movement had been seen in three weeks, and that scared the general. No one liked it when the general was scared. Krome turned to look at his three companions. They turned their metallic heads to look back at him. "Spotted anything sir?" One intoned to Krome in it's all to human voice. "Nothing yet...." He replied sadly. Just another day in this shit, he thought.
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Tears
Feb 1, 2007 20:48:22 GMT -5
Post by Inquisitor Loki on Feb 1, 2007 20:48:22 GMT -5
Interesting
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Tears
Feb 1, 2007 20:51:00 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 1, 2007 20:51:00 GMT -5
Yay a comment. What kind of treat do you want? Bacon flavor or chicken flavor. Or some twizzlers.
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Tears
Feb 1, 2007 21:13:49 GMT -5
Post by newguy on Feb 1, 2007 21:13:49 GMT -5
It looks promising
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Tears
Feb 1, 2007 22:15:20 GMT -5
Post by Inquisitor Loki on Feb 1, 2007 22:15:20 GMT -5
Yay a comment. What kind of treat do you want? Bacon flavor or chicken flavor. Or some twizzlers. Your soul, everyone knows getting comments from me are like deals with the devil.
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Tears
Feb 1, 2007 22:21:50 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 1, 2007 22:21:50 GMT -5
*Throws the whole box at Loki's face and runs into a hole*
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Tears
Feb 2, 2007 15:50:08 GMT -5
Post by Dagothkitty on Feb 2, 2007 15:50:08 GMT -5
I read this, I just didn't comment. It reminds me of an oblivion book, one of mt favs, uhhh.... surfeit of thieves I think.
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 0:22:44 GMT -5
Post by Maliku on Feb 3, 2007 0:22:44 GMT -5
*eats bacon*
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 18:25:51 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 3, 2007 18:25:51 GMT -5
*Throws frozen bacon at your face*
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 18:31:35 GMT -5
Post by GreyEidolon on Feb 3, 2007 18:31:35 GMT -5
*Ignores Bacon*
Short yes, but indeed promising. Unfortunately, I don't know anything about the setting...
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 18:35:07 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 3, 2007 18:35:07 GMT -5
I never usually put any of the real story into my first post.
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 21:49:43 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 3, 2007 21:49:43 GMT -5
Krome looked up wearily as revolver shots were heard. He checked his guards and saw that they already had their rifles up. "Shit. Sounds like and Out-Runner." Krome said unhappily. "Probably Track's group. I hope he's running as fast as he can." "Now what commander?" Asked one of the four Guardians. "Time to go home." Krome answered as he picked up his gear.
Krome walked into the ramshackle camp of wooden buildings. He dismissedn the Guardians and walked to the Camp Commander, Spade. "Spade. How many came back?" Krome asked. "Track came back and so did Joshua. Track lost three Out-Runners and Joshua pulled out intime to see a Stalker." Spade said in his grating voice. "Shit! A Stalker? This is getting worse every day!" Krome muttered.
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 22:08:54 GMT -5
Post by Maliku on Feb 3, 2007 22:08:54 GMT -5
*smirks* I love these types of stories.
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 22:27:48 GMT -5
Post by OGRenderence on Feb 3, 2007 22:27:48 GMT -5
I stole your bacon =P
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Tears
Feb 3, 2007 22:37:46 GMT -5
Post by Maliku on Feb 3, 2007 22:37:46 GMT -5
NO! I love bacon.
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