Umaril
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Post by Umaril on Mar 23, 2007 19:41:21 GMT -5
........spell check!
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Post by Remis on Mar 23, 2007 19:46:28 GMT -5
............I know!
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Post by Remis on Mar 24, 2007 7:04:19 GMT -5
Chapter 10
I ran into battle. My sword out in front, and my shield ready. As I reached the other brigades, I stood my place for a moment. Then the soilders got off. They wore armors like ours, but the armor was in a different shaped manner. Instead of having shoulder plates, they had spikes ranging in sizes. Also, many of them wore cloak-like armors, with only their upper torso having metal. This was strange to me, but these people were from Thalea, they were always strange.
One attacked me, and instinctively I raised my sword to block it. The sword literally shook in my hands. There was just so much power behind it. The soilder was just a boy about my age. But, I knew I couldn't fight. It wasn't behind me. The next thing I know though, is that I made sure the opponents blade slipped down and away from me and I sliced at him. I caused a giant gap in his armor, which was mainly just leather. The blood came out of it spattering and then it started to come out of his mouth. I backed away, startled and frightened.
Suddenly I felt a hand on my back, but it was a friendly one. I turned quickly to see Sir Kaien. There hold of solders from behind me. He had obviously put his hand on me for balance. Then he let it go. I changed directions, going after the soilders Sir Kaien was fighting. They looked a lot more powerful than me, but I attacked anyways. My kitana was extremely fast. It cut through 2 armors with one blow. There was just so much blood, coming out of these people that I killed. I stepped back, startled. I couldn't handle this.
The smell of sweat and blood was in the air, a horrible odor. I ran to a tree, and hid behind it. I would just wait till it ended, then come out, nothing changing. Then I saw someone, not an enemy, but, Jaque. He was on the ground, not moving. I walked closer and he was stripped of his sword and shield. But, the rising and falling of his chest wasn't happening. I turned him over to find a giant slash across his neck, my gloves were covered in blood.
I threw up beside the dead copse of Jaque. It disgusted me, all the gore and horror. I saw someone standing behind me. Or rather, I sensed it. I turned around, and saw Sir Kaien and Aryce. Then I dont know what happened next, I blacked out....
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Post by Uesugi on Mar 24, 2007 11:20:02 GMT -5
Soldiers, Katana.
Nice fight scene. The action was decent. But, as always, spellcheck!
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Post by me on Apr 13, 2007 17:23:39 GMT -5
Still waiting for the next update...
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Post by Dagothkitty on Apr 13, 2007 18:18:59 GMT -5
A bridage? Dang, much to kill. ;D
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Post by me on Apr 13, 2007 18:34:00 GMT -5
Brigade....gah... I hope he spent the time away buying a spell checker!
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