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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 13, 2007 23:14:32 GMT -5
I will eat you! *Eats cookies*
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Post by me on Apr 13, 2007 23:52:38 GMT -5
*Doesn't taste good*
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 14, 2007 8:39:55 GMT -5
Your not my cookies.
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 17, 2007 15:53:43 GMT -5
I'm only going to update on the weekends. Also I prefer to stay away from here, since it makes me say weird angry things. I blame the proboards. And the story containing 1337 speech.
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 17, 2007 16:48:02 GMT -5
High-Cross. A large Heretic base. Gerald himself named it "The Grand Base of Freedom." He named it that so his soldiers would feel like they had gained their "freedom." The nearest city was called, Terrorbound, and it's stood up to it's name so far in this war.
Three bodies lay in silver pools of blood. A fourth was still on his knees with a bullet in his forehead. The others were the same and there had been hundreds before them. Dimitri had told them it would happen, so they knew the risks. They all did. The executed warriors were all wearing the same emblems on their armor, a wave crashing against a cliff. A few thousand still fought with Dimitri, and they did so proudly. Why? Because they were the young and headstrong Water Mages.
Just thirteen feet out of the alley where the Water Mages were executed, a battle for a portion of the city was raging. Forty Heretics were firing blindly from behind a cement barrier. Even more mages shot back. A small skirmish over a small block.
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Post by me on Apr 17, 2007 20:53:08 GMT -5
Even though it wasn't as long as your last update I'm still liking this.
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 17, 2007 20:55:03 GMT -5
Hey I said I'm not doing a big one.
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Post by me on Apr 17, 2007 20:59:23 GMT -5
I know...I just said it still drew me in!
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 17, 2007 20:59:58 GMT -5
I'll write another one tomorrow.
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Post by me on Apr 17, 2007 21:01:08 GMT -5
That means I'll have to read it on thursday...I have a track meet tomorrow
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 17, 2007 21:03:55 GMT -5
Then screw it. I'll make it on thursday.
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Post by me on Apr 17, 2007 21:41:42 GMT -5
That means you can make a bigger one
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Apr 19, 2007 19:10:46 GMT -5
No.
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Post by me on Apr 19, 2007 19:21:09 GMT -5
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Post by Uesugi on Apr 19, 2007 20:35:35 GMT -5
OGRen, you skip around quite a lot, which is the only thing that really bugs me about your writing style... (Why didn't I see this update before?) But I liked it, non-the-less. As always, your stories are interesting.
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