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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jun 1, 2007 20:53:38 GMT -5
well...wasn't that guy a nazi? so I kinda figured you know it was time travel. Well its still a cool story.
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Jun 1, 2007 20:55:46 GMT -5
Oh that bit. No it's not time travel. Just being there at the time of the Nazi.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jun 1, 2007 20:57:15 GMT -5
oh..that's cool. So its like an alternat history thing?
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Jun 1, 2007 20:57:45 GMT -5
Earth 10089 is ruled by fricken Nazis man!
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Jun 1, 2007 20:58:32 GMT -5
Earth 40000 is the warhammer universe. It's a coincidence ok?
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jun 1, 2007 21:01:57 GMT -5
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....wow I guess I should have picked that up with you know the whole mech thing...well Its still cool
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Jun 1, 2007 21:03:19 GMT -5
Um no the Mecha is from this planet.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jun 1, 2007 21:05:30 GMT -5
I give up I obviously don't understand this warhammer thing....Its a good read tho so I shall continue to read it MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Jun 14, 2007 18:47:45 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]WARNING WARNING!!!
Squad 83560-2345 has sounded their warning beacon!
WARNING WARNING![/glow]
Bard lay in a small pool of his own red blood. Grarg, Jonathen and Fordmen lay nearby. The backs of the searches could easily be seen as the probed for life further down the tunnel. After about ten minutes Bard opened his left eye to check for any movement. After being asured he stood up and peeled off the red substance that he had placed under himself. Globing it all into a ball he looked at Grarg. "You gonna get up or am I going to have to chuck this at you?" Grarg opened his eyes and glared at Bard. "I was taking a nap jerk." Grarg replied as nastily as possible. Bard stuck his togue out and started to walk towards the nearest exit. "Fine stay and become a nice barbegue." Grarg stared at Bard as he left, then thought better and hurried after him.
Markus sat with his foot up in an old ammo shed. He was muttering about something of no particular importance when a soldier strolled in. "Hey Mar-kus. How's the baby's leg today?" He asked mockingly. "Better then your face." He replied cockily. The soldier scowled and grabbed the crate of ammo he had come to get. "You'll get your's Mark." He called as he left.
The soldier was walking back to his station when the ammo shed exploded. He turned only to say, "Well dreams do come true." Before resuming his march.
Johnn looked at where the explosion had just happened. "He'll be here soon." He remarked to Grarg.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jun 14, 2007 20:50:17 GMT -5
Awsome man! I can't wait for some more!
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Post by me on Jun 14, 2007 23:17:48 GMT -5
More questions then answers....its like I'm watching Red Vs Blue...
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Post by renofthefallenstar on Jun 15, 2007 10:27:32 GMT -5
Me, a good story doesn't answer all the questions right away. It needs to give questions first.
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Post by me on Jun 15, 2007 16:23:04 GMT -5
Me, a good story doesn't answer all the questions right away. It needs to give questions first. I know that...I was just commenting on that fact
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Post by Uesugi on Jun 16, 2007 1:19:47 GMT -5
Actually, a good story doesn't have senseless reasons for questions to remained unanswered, and only leaves what it must (in the logical sense) to the reader's imagination... I liked it OGRen, though in the latest update, "searches" should be "searchers" in the first paragraph... And good to see you are writing more that a single paragraph now... Good job, mate.
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Post by OGRenderence on Dec 8, 2007 0:46:52 GMT -5
It's dusty in here!
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