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Post by me on Oct 31, 2006 23:28:50 GMT -5
The song of a grave a dirge of death how many have fallen to this sirens song so many words to this never ending song one word I shall remeber
"No"
A tomb for the darkened souls one for the broken hearted a crypt filled by the lost singing the songs of loss of never ending sorrow a single word that shall haunt you a single word I shall never let you forget
"Goodbye"
Such a silent tomb filled with lament a terrible thing to lay in silence but now to tell the world of this tomb
"empty"
The tomb filled by the lost those that loved those that dared by those that dreamed those of hopeful minds only to fall at the end of time
"sorry"
not very good....but hey wrote it in about ten minutes
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Post by me on Nov 1, 2006 0:44:22 GMT -5
well no comments...either it sn't popular..or I've been on to long and been to bored
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Post by me on Nov 1, 2006 17:04:50 GMT -5
you people really hate it dont you....your making me sad enough to flood the boards with more.....
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Post by Raistlin on Nov 2, 2006 15:44:07 GMT -5
i liked it. i just got to reading it, i don't stray to this thread very often.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Nov 2, 2006 15:46:34 GMT -5
The flows off, but..... i thought it was creative. Perhaps a little better ryhming.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Nov 2, 2006 15:49:34 GMT -5
you said emo in your topic title. Just for that I'm not going to read it XD.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Nov 2, 2006 15:50:56 GMT -5
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Nov 2, 2006 16:29:50 GMT -5
you said emo in your topic title. Just for that I'm not going to read it XD.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Nov 2, 2006 16:54:44 GMT -5
-_-
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Post by me on Nov 2, 2006 17:04:10 GMT -5
Yah I wrote another one today...when I was feeling a little wierd....Ill try to post it when I get home
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Post by me on Nov 3, 2006 20:11:42 GMT -5
Here I stand, once again Angels and demons circle above me The taunting voices of imagined friends the false comforts of certain enemies glorious angels of wrath the despised demons of mercy all circle above me in my place of sanctuary
"my Fortress"
intruders, ones who don't belong why does he taunt me? why does she laugh? why cant I speak? they taunt me, in my inner tower my place of sanctuary why do they stay in my safe place in my tower
"Leave"
My sanctum, my safest place I have retreated, even deeper why do they stay in my mind, why does she follow into my heart, alone in my sanctum in my tower my safest place only she has followed why does she taunt me
"please"
The angels the demons they still circle my safe place my fortress my inner sanctum why does she follow into the depths of my heart
"why"
A tormentor, in my inner sanctum in my castle, in my heart why do you follow why did she come to call down my angels of wrath only to bring my demons of mercy why did she come, why does she torment me why did I ever let her in why did I ever give her my key
"sorrow"
why do I love this torment why is this pain so sweet please tell me how I can stand such torment why do I stand for such torment for a name that isn't mine for a person that isn't mine how can I stand such torment
"love"
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Post by poo on Nov 3, 2006 21:41:52 GMT -5
If I laugh, I like it. I laughed.
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Nov 3, 2006 21:51:42 GMT -5
XD......Seriously not bad.
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Post by me on Nov 3, 2006 23:20:00 GMT -5
Im suprised you can laugh at such a depressinbg poem.....thanks
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Post by Raistlin on Nov 4, 2006 18:39:15 GMT -5
;D
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