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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Dec 5, 2006 21:50:47 GMT -5
Just a little poem I've been working on and finally finished. Let me know what you think. The bell chimes once as you enter the hall. Blend with the crowd and mingle with all. Look around to find your mark. Now wait a while for cover of dark. Take out your knife to sharpen the blade. Don't waste your time, kill the maid!
The bell chimes twice as the guests go to bed. No one suspects that a women is dead. Now up the stairs and into his room. Send this poor man to his doom. Then go down the hall and meet your wife. Kill this women who ruined you life.
The third bell chimes and your deed is done. Quickly now you must go on the run. The cops catch wind and go on the chase Upon this night your death you will face. For as you depart and the stairs you decend. With bullets and blood your life comes to an end.
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Post by me on Dec 5, 2006 23:44:24 GMT -5
... XD
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Dec 6, 2006 16:40:52 GMT -5
whats with the XD?
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Post by OGRenderence on Dec 6, 2006 21:45:21 GMT -5
I wont comment cuz I'm not a poetry lover.
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Post by me on Dec 7, 2006 2:41:57 GMT -5
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Post by Dagothkitty on Dec 12, 2006 19:58:58 GMT -5
Well, i thought it was awesome blood moon.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 5, 2007 20:12:32 GMT -5
Thanks dagoth XD
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