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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 19, 2007 22:15:40 GMT -5
Imortal If I could live forever wouldn't I be clever? A world were no one dies there's nothing left but lies. When nothing's left to find. Just a shut down of the mind. If I could live forever would I really be so clever? Just some random poem I wrote...literally a second ago lol
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Post by me on Jan 19, 2007 22:16:42 GMT -5
Thats a nice split second poem right there hmm...maybe I should post the two I forgot to...
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 19, 2007 22:17:27 GMT -5
Thankya
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Post by me on Jan 19, 2007 22:23:50 GMT -5
No problem it was good.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Jan 19, 2007 22:27:31 GMT -5
Yeah, it was pretty good. Just one thing: If you were to live forever, wouldn't "Truth" be the only thing left, rather than lies?
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 19, 2007 22:31:09 GMT -5
'sigh' look I'm just trying to rhyme ok. Give me a break. Lol maybe but there'd be lies to. If no one could die then wouldn't knowledge be the only power left. Then lies would be a good weapon. Ya see ya see XD I'M RIGHT!
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Post by me on Jan 19, 2007 22:51:36 GMT -5
Plus in the search for knowledge lies have often resulted from the search for truth.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Jan 19, 2007 22:56:01 GMT -5
I thought it was about him being the only immortal. After everyone else is gone, after opinion is all but eradicated, what's left to obscure the truth?
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 20, 2007 9:41:28 GMT -5
Look I wrote it in literally 10 seconds give me a break here.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 20, 2007 11:27:22 GMT -5
It was a very good sgort read. The world is corrupted in lies, so it may be very well true that all the person in the poem knows is lies. So.... Good Job anyway bloodmoon, for the 4 second read, though entertaining.
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Post by monkeygurl on Mar 19, 2007 17:53:25 GMT -5
theres a song by nickleback thats called if everyone cared and it talks about something like this and a world where everyone cared no one lied and a whole bunch of other good things like that and if all those things happened "nobody dies" (he says that at the end of the song duh!)
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Post by me on Mar 19, 2007 18:25:35 GMT -5
I saw the vid for that! My friend has it up on his myspace
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