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Post by GreyEidolon on Jan 29, 2007 16:24:06 GMT -5
Words were exchanged And things rearranged In the waning hours of "What'd you expect?"
I was taken aback By a kid with a knack For using faux dialect
So sick and repulsed My soul body convulsed And weakly I staggered away
Unvindicated And certainly jaded Selfishly I did stray
But Now I See! Mock Apathy Masks Empathy! Gordian Chains that Binded Me! Cease To Be! Eternally And Evermore I am Free! No Longer Do I Envy Thee!
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 29, 2007 18:11:55 GMT -5
That, I think, was the best poem I have ever seen on the guild. Excellent grey!
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 29, 2007 19:08:24 GMT -5
awsome poem grey. You continue to impress me with your talent every time I read your work.
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Post by me on Jan 29, 2007 20:51:53 GMT -5
WRITE MORE OFTEN
'nuff said
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 29, 2007 20:55:16 GMT -5
Yes, you need to write a lot more grey, you have great writing skills.
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Jan 29, 2007 21:18:40 GMT -5
Very good. Your skills are awesome. I totally agree with what the others said.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Feb 1, 2007 14:39:36 GMT -5
Wow, I almost forgot about this. Anyway, I'm glad it was well recieved ;D, I almost didn't post it.
As for me writing more, I try, but it's just not as fun right now. And that's why I write, because I enjoy it, not because of some obligation.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Feb 2, 2007 21:32:47 GMT -5
Sorry for the weird double post thing, but I have a question.
This doesn't sound like a depressed or downbeat poem does it? 'Cause that is totally not what I was going for.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Feb 2, 2007 21:34:38 GMT -5
Not really. I liked it because it was a good piece of litearture, not because it meant something that might reflect on waht the guild is going through.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Feb 2, 2007 21:37:15 GMT -5
It could...at the very least it could be applied to the situation. It's a little more general . I guess it's theme is "revalation". Iunno
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Post by Maliku on Feb 11, 2007 20:56:08 GMT -5
I bet my friend would like this. She LOVES poetry. Anyway...good stuff Grey, you should write more.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Feb 12, 2007 11:44:01 GMT -5
I bet my friend would like this. She LOVES poetry. Anyway...good stuff Grey, you should write more. amen
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