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Post by GreyEidolon on Mar 27, 2007 19:32:40 GMT -5
Ambition
That which is scarred upon cloud-face! That which boastfully stides across seas With the gait of Winds And Earth-Faith! That which calls to action, to Salt and Rust! That which bellows Storms and reddens the Sky! Fire to fire, that which consumes and is consumed! Unrest, Initiative, Drive! The Dusk-lit and Moon-Born! Tha which is perfect in Simplicity! Short, I know. I wrote this in the last few minutes of Creative Writing Class. I kinda like it.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Mar 27, 2007 19:38:32 GMT -5
I like it. But ofcoare opalescent onlooker is my all time favorite of your works.
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Post by GreyEidolon on Mar 27, 2007 19:42:15 GMT -5
Yeah...that one rhymes...I try to rhyme, but sometimes I don't have enough time.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Mar 27, 2007 19:43:38 GMT -5
ya just did!...sorta
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Post by GreyEidolon on Mar 27, 2007 19:44:48 GMT -5
No joke intended.
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Mar 27, 2007 19:44:57 GMT -5
None of my poems will ever rhyme... I just can't do it
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Mar 27, 2007 19:49:30 GMT -5
Nice, I like it. I wish my school offered a creative writing class.
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Post by me on Mar 28, 2007 15:34:27 GMT -5
Mine does but I probably wont take it...in that sort of a medium my mind would grow...to...creative
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Post by Dagothkitty on Mar 28, 2007 15:42:12 GMT -5
Well, I thought it was good, though I couldn't understand much.
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Post by me on Mar 28, 2007 15:51:38 GMT -5
It was good...I never said it wasn't
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