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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Mar 27, 2007 19:54:18 GMT -5
Meh... I was bored The Nature of War
The shadows fall The sun wakes
The shadows rise The sun dies
The world is in a constant struggle Evil Good And the many shades of gray
The life-taking fire And the life-giving water
The earth under our feet And the heavens above us
How can humans make peace with their brothers? When nature itself is in a constant struggle
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Post by me on Mar 28, 2007 15:33:33 GMT -5
Soundsgood but it is really short.... and sorta repetitive at the beginning but otherwise very good.
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Mar 28, 2007 17:41:45 GMT -5
It was supposed to be short, I did it in 5 minutes and I might add more to it later if I think of something.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Mar 28, 2007 18:15:35 GMT -5
I don't think my poems. Whatever comes to mind appears on the page. I thought it was pretty good, actually.
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Post by Inquisitor Loki on Mar 28, 2007 21:02:58 GMT -5
I don't think my poems. Whatever comes to mind appears on the page. I thought it was pretty good, actually. Thanks
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Post by lanaia74 on Aug 7, 2007 4:32:38 GMT -5
Superb! Bravo! Applauds!
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