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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 20, 2008 14:15:00 GMT -5
Last sweet song
It’s the last sweet song of life. With colors red and gold! But alas its beauty is betrayed for its coming brings only death. But still the world will sing the lovely song they know.
They fall to the ground, all life is lost. But still the world is singing their colors red and gold. And divinely they fall like angels from heaven. With beauty endless in flight.
And now the world is dieing. It’s turning white and cold. But the people never mourn. No tears will fall for death. For they know the truth. That the last sweet song will come again.
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Post by me on Jan 20, 2008 17:07:38 GMT -5
It seemed to jump around a bit, but I still liked it alot.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Jan 20, 2008 17:45:38 GMT -5
you jump around a bit =_=... you know like over holes in the ground...and occasionally a rock or two. Oh you play football too, there's bound to be some jumping involved there....
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Post by DEATH97 on Jan 20, 2008 23:12:13 GMT -5
Yeah, I kinda have to agree with (Me) the flow just felt a bit off. Not bad at all though.
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