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Post by Abaddon on Oct 24, 2006 22:59:23 GMT -5
Leena jumped the counter with the shopkeeper half a beat behind, diamonds in hand. she ran out the door, running toward the waterfront. the unfortunate shopkeeper soon lost track of her.He shouted "Stop thief"
Unfortunately for her. The guards responded with drawing their weapons and following in hot pursuit. She ran into the Elven Gardens with the cops at her heels.
Durtz-Gro-Malog stepped off the ship. He had been guarding pilgrims in Vvardenfell for a fighter's guild assignment. their last and final stop was at the Imperial city for the temple of the One. He needed an ale. he asked the nearest pub and the guard replied with "The Bloated Float. Take a left" He strolled on his way.
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Post by Maliku on Oct 25, 2006 15:45:34 GMT -5
No choices?
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Post by OGRenderence on Oct 25, 2006 16:24:06 GMT -5
I'm sorry but I don't like it. Cops isn't a words that will ever be used in Elder Scrolls. And no choises there fore not a CYOA.
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Post by Maliku on Oct 25, 2006 16:28:51 GMT -5
I thought the same thing.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 26, 2006 16:39:40 GMT -5
oh, cut him some slack guys, its probably his first time, and its really hard on the first. Just watch and, and try not to be posting comments only about the negatives.
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Post by OGRenderence on Oct 26, 2006 21:36:40 GMT -5
Sigh. First rule of CYOAs. Choices. I got chewed for my first story. If you can't learn to take critisism then don't make it. Yes I'm working on my Problem still. =( I think I'm doing quite well.
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Post by Maliku on Oct 26, 2006 21:39:59 GMT -5
I accept it. I suck at writing so If I'd get a bad comment I don't care.
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Post by OGRenderence on Oct 26, 2006 21:41:15 GMT -5
Wasn't talking about you.
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Post by Maliku on Oct 26, 2006 21:45:08 GMT -5
I know, I was agreeing with you.
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Post by OGRenderence on Oct 26, 2006 21:56:43 GMT -5
Kay then.
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Post by Abaddon on Oct 27, 2006 18:04:36 GMT -5
Okay notes to self Cyoa A}Warrior's viewpoint b}Thieves view point first to 3
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Post by OGRenderence on Oct 27, 2006 18:21:31 GMT -5
A.
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Post by dogonda on Oct 27, 2006 18:34:44 GMT -5
A
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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 27, 2006 19:41:18 GMT -5
Yes, i choose warrior cause' there is too much stories with assassins/thieves.
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 27, 2006 23:44:23 GMT -5
I pick A too. Ogre was just pointing out actual facts he felt was wrong, it was helpful critizisem. Still I hate how most ppl treat others on the other forums, so just cause someone was mean to you on another forum, doesn't mean its right to do it here. I won't allow it. Nobody has done this, but I'm just speakin my mind for future reference. I want to help our new members out ;D
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