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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Apr 29, 2007 20:09:56 GMT -5
its always been in first person. I guess its been longer than I thought lol.
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Post by Uesugi on Apr 30, 2007 17:56:58 GMT -5
Decent update. Not much more to say. Try to convey more emotion, though, and a smell cannot singe your nose...
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on May 1, 2007 5:30:52 GMT -5
yeah I know I was looking for the word but couldn't find it so I used singe. Whatever.
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Post by Dagothkitty on May 8, 2007 6:02:59 GMT -5
How about stung?
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Post by Umaril on May 8, 2007 8:11:49 GMT -5
Singe could be used metaphorically, but stung like dagoth said would be best me thinks.
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