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Post by Romuluss Revenge on Sept 24, 2006 12:51:58 GMT -5
Romulus was nervouse as he drank another cup of cyrodillic brandy. His wife had been gone for quite some time visiting her relatives and she hadn't benn back yet. He brought the cup to his lips and suddenly heard a noise out side his door. As he walked to the door he admired his nice house and thanked the nine that he was lucky enough to have a good life after all that had happened to him in his past he was happy to settle down. As he turned the nob to open the door he felt a chill run down his spine. He became even more nervouse as it was the middle of spring. he opened the door and his face turned white. There in rags was the body of his now dead wife. "This this can't be" he said has he looked at the dead body of his former love. He notice a slit going across her throat. He looked it over. "this looks like the work of an assassin". He then noticed a letter in the pocket of his wife.
It read as following: well my dear friend did you think we wouldn't find you? This does as I admit go against our usually standards as this was no contract but revenge. But we thought we could make an exception just for you. hehehe. Your wife was a screamer up into the end we had a little fun with her before we killed her. Her screams ran through the halls of our sanctuary like beautiful music. But don't worry her death was quick unlike yours will be when we find you that is. Your loyal wife wouldn't talk its a shame that we will have to find you our selves. Well farwell for now my old friend untill we meet again.
There was no signature just a stamped notice thats said the dark brotherhood.
By the end of the note Romulus was clenching his fist in anger. He took her body and made an appointment for a proper funeral.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 24, 2006 13:00:42 GMT -5
Good. Keep it up
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Post by VICTORBRAVO on Sept 24, 2006 13:24:57 GMT -5
Good.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 24, 2006 13:35:31 GMT -5
whoops I posted it wrong. My name is BloodMoonWolf. And the name of the story is Romulus's Revenge.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 24, 2006 13:40:51 GMT -5
Rare!!! Bloodmoon should be a beginner rank!
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Post by RareCarpet on Sept 24, 2006 13:55:55 GMT -5
aak ok
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 24, 2006 14:18:23 GMT -5
ok I'm continueing my story a bit now
It was raining during the funeral. Every one noticed that how pale and spaced out Romulus was. They didn't think much of it since he did just lose his wife. That night Romulus went back to his home. "I will get my revenge" he said to himself. " Those bastards will pay for what they have done". Truth be told Romulus was no stranger to combat. He walked over to a wall and slid it open revealing a secret room. "I never thought I would have to use these again" Romulus said as he stepped into the darkly lit room filled with weapons. "hmm my old bow its still as good as the day I bought it". Romulus picked up his bow and some silver arrows. He walked over to a table and picked up a raiment that was completely black except for a few letters on the sleeve that spelled Night Fang. "Night Fang yes thats what I was called before back when I worked for the Dark Brotherhood".He grabbed some basic potions and a bed roll put his raiment on and left the room. "The only sactuary I can still remember is in cheydenhal". Romulus said to him self. "I will start there and kill them all".
Thats all I'm going to write at this moment let me know what you think of it so far
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 24, 2006 14:44:56 GMT -5
The funeral was raining? Oh well, minor flaw. Other then that good !
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 24, 2006 14:51:39 GMT -5
whoops sorry about that. But yea check it out I have a sig and an avatar now I love my avatar
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 24, 2006 14:53:15 GMT -5
I love mine too.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 24, 2006 20:50:06 GMT -5
just a note I'm going to switch my story to first person I feel it would make for a better story in first person. But I'm not going to write anything at this moment I'm too tired.
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Post by DEATH97 on Sept 25, 2006 12:51:17 GMT -5
Nice work Bloodmoon. I like the first person perspective as well, using that in my current project. ps.. nice to have you in the guild. Keep em coming.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 25, 2006 15:51:54 GMT -5
thanks I'll write some more to night if I can get some time. but I usually have karate on mondays and wensdays so I don't have time to write.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 26, 2006 13:54:24 GMT -5
Ok like I said I'm going to continue the story in first person and the first part will be like a prologue of sorts. So now I'll continue.
I began to leave and walked towards the door when I realized that I may look suspicious with my armor on. I decided to put on normal clothes and departed on my journey. I only knew of one sanctuary, in cheydenhal so I decided to start there. I left my quaint house and was careful not to attract attention. The Dark Brotherhood had eyes every where.
As I left my town of chorrol I didn't run into much. A wolf or two that I easily delt with and the occasional mudcrab and rat but nothing too difficult to kill. As I came near my goal I began to think of a plan of action, after all I can't simply walk in." Hmm lets see if I wait by the well I may spy an assassin coming out for a mission. If I can kill them I can probably take a key and kill the remaining members in the sactuary. From there I'll interrogate one of them and see if I can learn the location of the other sactuaries." As I walked I noticed that Cheydenhal was near."finaly they will pay for what they did." It had been a week but I was finaly there and now I must get to their hide out and wait till my opportunity comes.
so this is all I'll write for now let me know what you think and I will probably write a little more tonight if I can.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 26, 2006 16:31:09 GMT -5
Suspensful!
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