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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 8, 2006 9:51:46 GMT -5
well the sheets wouldn't tear if they were 1. tied by the devil knot its like the best knot. and I'm going to describe his race and all that later. I realized I made that mistake so I'm going to fit that in later. And to make the sheets more strong. Cloth can't rip when its wet. The blood making it wet would not allow the sheet to rip. I realize I made a good amount of mistakes on this so I'm going to fix them as I go along.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 9, 2006 20:37:53 GMT -5
Oh and to be fair this was my first story ever so I'm bound to make a few mistakes.
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Post by dogonda on Oct 9, 2006 20:46:39 GMT -5
I took the sheets part for my story 2 no offense.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 9, 2006 20:48:03 GMT -5
none taken I'm glad its almost like an honor. lol. But yea go ahead. It is the most reasonable way to tie some one up any way. Like come on do you really expect some one to have with them ropes or chains. lol
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 10, 2006 3:17:30 GMT -5
I.. want...more...!!!
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Post by GreyEidolon on Oct 10, 2006 11:52:36 GMT -5
Well, if you'll excuse me I'm gonna go hang myself...
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 10, 2006 16:35:53 GMT -5
awsome go to that grey. By the way Death I'll write some more soon. I'm actually ending the story soon. I just have to write a campaigne speach right now.
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Post by OGRenderence on Oct 10, 2006 16:38:23 GMT -5
*Flashes rock on sign*
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 10, 2006 19:30:42 GMT -5
hmm I can't decide. What should I work on? I have time so I'm asking what story would you like me to write at the moment? Fate is in your hands.
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Post by dogonda on Oct 10, 2006 20:03:26 GMT -5
hmm
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Post by dogonda on Oct 10, 2006 20:04:11 GMT -5
this
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Post by Maliku on Oct 10, 2006 20:04:59 GMT -5
This story, or Life of a Combatant.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 10, 2006 20:06:17 GMT -5
good because I started writting this one. Wanna proofread it for me? What I got so far. This is going to be an important part so I want it to be perfect.
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Post by dogonda on Oct 10, 2006 20:07:48 GMT -5
yea i will proofread.
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Post by Maliku on Oct 10, 2006 20:09:07 GMT -5
I'll proofread if you want. If Dagonda doesn't want to.
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