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Post by Dagothkitty on Nov 13, 2006 18:32:43 GMT -5
Need help?
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 13, 2006 18:33:40 GMT -5
I'll get going again. Also your wanted on your site.
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Post by OGRenderence on Dec 6, 2006 21:35:46 GMT -5
Leyawiin was barely defended. Only twenty men had stayed behind to defend in-case of an attack. The rest had gone to help put out Bravil's blazing fires. The Lord of Leyawiin was very upset about this, for he had sent his own towns people there. His wife, atleast, had been sent to the Imperial City. He sadly glanced at the ten guards that loitered about the Main Hall. This was a bad day indeed.
A lone guard paced the wall top. He looked about with his bright eyes and made sure that nothing was near the walls. A cloud moved across the full moon. A slight sound behind him, made him turn sharply. A dark figure moved impossibly fast towards him. He opened his mouth to scream, but nothing came out! The cloud pasted and nothing was there. Somewhere, someone's bright eyes closed forever.
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Post by DEATH97 on Dec 7, 2006 12:47:05 GMT -5
Sweet, and suspensful! Good update Private.
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Post by OGRenderence on Dec 7, 2006 16:50:40 GMT -5
Well some one noticed.
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Post by OGRenderence on Dec 21, 2006 19:29:22 GMT -5
This is dedicated to Death and Dagonda. No one else.
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Post by OGRenderence on Jan 4, 2007 22:06:24 GMT -5
This is dead. I'm out of ideas for all my stories. I have failed myself and my readers. =( ='(
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Post by uesugi on Jan 11, 2007 20:57:00 GMT -5
Well, I read it and I liked it. Despite the looming comments, I finally finished. I liked the comedic end of it, and I think the story was really great. Aside from a few spelling errors, I noticed you skipped around a bit and went over things without much detail. It didn't detract from the story all that much, though. Seriously, OGRen, wait to be inspired by something if you have to. This story is good, and I want some more of it.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 11, 2007 21:03:08 GMT -5
These are the complex words of mine, from uesugi. Mine is simpler. DON'T STOP DOING WHAT YOU LOVE. if you love it, which i'm sure you do. Now, give me an update, Please. *uesgugi is 10893487% right*
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Post by OGRenderence on Jan 11, 2007 21:10:42 GMT -5
I thought about these stories. If I don't think I get better ideas.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 11, 2007 21:12:01 GMT -5
Then stop getting ideas and update. I promise.... i'll read it. I relized now that being the reader is far more important then being the writer.
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Post by Maliku on Jan 13, 2007 14:36:02 GMT -5
GIVE ME AN UPDATE! Seriously though, I love all your stories.
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Post by OGRenderence on Jan 13, 2007 16:50:52 GMT -5
It's called Crowhaven: Endings. It's in Part two.
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