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Post by me on May 13, 2007 21:55:08 GMT -5
Yet still eliminating them closes plot options, and besides that no one can tell the future, maybe he will need something done in the future.
Anyways this might actually open up some interesting possibilities as well....
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Post by Uesugi on May 13, 2007 22:03:26 GMT -5
One thing: though I you say it is easier to simply say Argonian, I would suggest you don't. It gives a facade of a shallow world. You have a lot of dialogue, which is good. It all works well, too. But, I would suggest more description. Stories are made of more than just talk. Anyway, I can't wait to see what else comes along. Good work so far.
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Post by Pentium Evil on May 13, 2007 22:09:50 GMT -5
Good point *modified*
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