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Post by DEATH97 on Sept 26, 2006 23:39:23 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] It will make all your dreams come true... [/glow] [glow=red,2,300] Just before it kills you. [/glow] [shadow=red,left,300] Coming Soon.... [/shadow]
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 27, 2006 5:55:57 GMT -5
awsome I can't wait. Awsome title by the way
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Post by Maliku on Sept 27, 2006 14:43:48 GMT -5
Nice preview, great title too.
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VICTORBRAVO
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~The Super Soldier Writer~
RAWR! Its VICTORBRAVO!
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Post by VICTORBRAVO on Sept 27, 2006 14:52:09 GMT -5
DEATH, does EVERYTHING you say sound like a movie preview? Like when you gave your characters history in the RP board...
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Post by DEATH97 on Sept 27, 2006 16:01:08 GMT -5
DEATH, does EVERYTHING you say sound like a movie preview? Like when you gave your characters history in the RP board... LOL.. I guess thats true.. I'm just used to making Tag lines for my work I guess.
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Valgaera
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I am the Light within the Darkness
Je suis le Lumi?re dans l'Obscurit
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Post by Valgaera on Sept 27, 2006 22:11:38 GMT -5
They sohlud make movies out of your ideas...
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Post by DEATH97 on Sept 27, 2006 23:59:56 GMT -5
This story is in the production phase, basically I have the whole plot down scattered in three different notebooks. It has never been read by anyone, or posted online. You all will be the first to read it. As I'm not finished writing this one, what I do post here will be a rough draft version which I will be editing on the fly.
------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sara, after hearing about her brothers suicide. Decides, not everything is as it seems. Her suspicions grow when she receives an old journal and a letter from her brother a week after his death.
Once she opens the book she discovers It has passed through the hands of kings, and peasants alike. They've read its words, and told it their secrets, and it has sealed their fates.
Now as she struggles to find the truth, buried in the riddles of the past. She finds herself a target for those that would kill for its secrets. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Thats the basic plot, but the best stuff happens within the Diary itself (allot of surprises in this one).
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 28, 2006 13:25:04 GMT -5
awsome it sounds really cool.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 28, 2006 15:05:36 GMT -5
Yup.
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Post by Maliku on Sept 28, 2006 17:08:56 GMT -5
It sounds really cool.
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 10, 2006 5:49:07 GMT -5
Palo's estate, England 1312 A.D
Lightning streaks the sky as thunder shakes the foundation of the old stable. Rain falls hard upon the roof as water drips quickly through the many holes and gaps it presents. Beyond the storm, the stable remains quiet. No horses are boarded here. Just one man who sits unwaivering at a small table against the back wall. Illuminated by a single candle, his once shiny armor now appeared aged, and has slightly rusted over the years.
His shield leans against the tables leg, now battered with several dents. All of which represents a time the red cross on its face has saved his life.
Next to his shield is the very sword he received in his Knighthood. Its blade stained with the blood of a recent kill. For 27 years he has raised his sword with his brothers willing to die for a cause greater than himself. But tonight.... he was the cause.
Now the knights fight for him. They lay down their lives so that he may complete this last service for his king, his country, and his God. He wishes he were with them now. They were fighting for their beliefs, for humanity, and for their very souls...
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Post by Maliku on Oct 10, 2006 16:27:12 GMT -5
I wonder what happens next...
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 12, 2006 8:44:17 GMT -5
Sorry Maliku, but I decided to go with the SRC story over this one. I'll come back to this one before too long though
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Post by Maliku on Oct 12, 2006 15:53:06 GMT -5
Alright, thats fine. I think I like SRC a little more now though. I wanna know what happens to that firefighter guy.
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Post by DEATH97 on Nov 7, 2006 12:06:52 GMT -5
I drew this last year... Its just a quick sketch I made, of what I wanted the cover to look like. img265.imageshack.us/img265/6558/brdhe4.png(I don't have a scanner so these are pics taken from my digital camera.. sorry the quality sux. )
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