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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 29, 2006 5:39:17 GMT -5
oh ok cool. I would ask you to be my proofreader maliku but I don't want to trouble you. You have your own story so I don't want to take away your writing time. CAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE III'MM GREAT XD.
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Post by Maliku on Sept 29, 2006 18:45:22 GMT -5
Bloodmoon, I can be your proofreader if you want. It doesn't matter to me. If you want you can just give me PM with the story.
Also, if you have MSN you can send it through there.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 29, 2006 18:47:47 GMT -5
nah I don't have any instant messangers. Well I have aol but thats at my mom's house and I'm barely over there. But yea I guess if you want to be a proofreader then sure I'll be glad to send you my work before I post it.
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Post by Maliku on Sept 29, 2006 18:51:57 GMT -5
Alright, I usually leave the computer on. So, I should get your PM if you send me one.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 29, 2006 18:53:52 GMT -5
Awsome glad to have you on team bloodmoon.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 29, 2006 22:21:10 GMT -5
I think the battle might have been cooler if you stayed on horseback. That would be sweet. But it still is sweeeeet!
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 30, 2006 12:31:42 GMT -5
Yea but then I wouldn't have been able to keep track. But there will be battles on horse back later it just seems to easy if they fight the first battle on horses.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 30, 2006 12:35:04 GMT -5
* cries in corner, gets uo and stabs horse with daedris dagger*
Stupid Steed!
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 30, 2006 12:45:20 GMT -5
well dagoth you over reacted quickly XD
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 30, 2006 13:08:47 GMT -5
Just playyin. Golden calculator 2 didvide, 3 DIVIDE!" i used to love that song. lol
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 30, 2006 13:36:04 GMT -5
? what the hell are you talking about.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Sept 30, 2006 14:01:10 GMT -5
They really stupid song by outkast our whatever.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Sept 30, 2006 14:04:09 GMT -5
oh
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 5, 2006 19:17:28 GMT -5
Ok sorry I haven't written much I have had a bit of writers block on this story and writers gift for my other story. But here is a little more.
We finally arrived back to town. I ordered my men to get a nights sleep and if necessary go to the hospital and get their wounds checked out. We had some men tell the families of the dead the bad news. After all this was done all I wanted to do was sleep. There were so many things that happened today and I needed to deal with them alone.
I approached my room but to my distain there was a note on the door. It said that I was to be present in the eysilldor room as soon as possible. I was familiar with this room. I had used it often in my life. It consisted of one large mirror in the middle of a table. Truth is every major city had these. These mirrors could project the face of a person and transmit sound thru endless space. It was a great convienence for us. But an even greater mystery. These mirrors were one of few surviving treasures for the past. The age of enchantment they used to call it. It was a time of magic and wonder before some curious and terrible event caused the last of the magic users to die out. With it most of the enchanted items were destroyed or lost. No one knows exactly what happend then. Mainly because it was so long ago. Legends have been told of these days but no one really knows what is truth and what is simply myth. As I thought to my self I realized that I was nearly there. I opened the room and gazed at the marvelous room. With the giant mirror in the center. No matter how many times I came to this room it always impressed me.
Thats all I'm going to write at this moment. I'm still fleshing out the next part.
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 12, 2006 8:46:58 GMT -5
This is strange, I swear I've commented on this at least three times, but everytime I come here to read this, no comments are present...Giving me crazy Deja Vu. Still, for like the third time reading this its still good. I like the mirrors.
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