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Post by Dagothkitty on Oct 13, 2006 15:28:53 GMT -5
more....more..............MORE!!!
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 13, 2006 15:31:20 GMT -5
DAMMIT I'M WORKING ON IT!!!!!!!!! GIVE ME A BRAKE.....that being said I'll post it soon I want to type it and get it proofread.
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Post by uesugi on Oct 13, 2006 15:40:26 GMT -5
I like that it's in first person. I don't think I've ever read any fantasy written in first person, so kudos. And I hope more is done with the 'age of enchantment'.
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 14, 2006 23:41:43 GMT -5
Alright Uesugi... after that last comment you better go over and read my story Marked: Tale of Oblivion. The gods demand it!! oh and Its an ok story too
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 15, 2006 21:00:10 GMT -5
oh it will be. In fact the whole story is based on it. lol. So yea it will be. XD
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 15, 2006 21:00:25 GMT -5
oh and shut up death. lol
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 17, 2006 1:31:04 GMT -5
don't tell me to shut up... you shut up
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Post by Maliku on Oct 17, 2006 21:04:31 GMT -5
How about everyone shuts up?
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 18, 2006 5:43:54 GMT -5
I agree with maliku...and shut up death XD
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Post by DEATH97 on Oct 19, 2006 3:36:47 GMT -5
alright I agree too... *coughshutupbloodmooncough* ;D
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Post by Maliku on Oct 19, 2006 15:04:49 GMT -5
Cmon Bloodmoon, update atleast ONE of your stories.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 19, 2006 18:41:44 GMT -5
Fine I'll update this one. Forget getting it proofread some more. But I'm having trouble with Romulus. i'm not sure where I'm going with it. lol.
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 19, 2006 18:43:52 GMT -5
I walked into the room. Fog was in the air as I walked towards the chair. A giant mirror sat infront of me. Fog lifting from the earth a voice came thru and a blurred image trancended from the mirror. At first I could barely make out who it was. But then it spoke.
“So Ragnathor we meet again” came the voice from the mirror. The Image slowly appeared and I realized who it was.
“Yes it looks like we have Torrin.” I said. Torrin had been a good friend of mine for most of my life, and now it seemed he made general like me. The image became clear now and I looked upon the familiar face of my old friend. He had curly brown hair and grey eyes that seemed to look right thru you. Now completely visible I noticed something strange. He seemed to have a long jagged scar came down his face.
“What happened to you? Run into some trouble?” I asked a little concerned.
“Yes, we’ve had an attack recently. A platoon of goblins stormed our city. We lost a lot of good men by the hand of those scum. One of the bastards slashed me when I wasn’t looking. I was lucky not to lose an eye! But back to the reason behind this meeting. Something’s up. Goblins have never been this organized. Call it a hunch but I think they are working with and outside force!” he said, now in a more serious tone.
“Yes they attacked us too but we met them before they could do any harm to the city. I got by with out much harm but my brother... those bastards killed my brother!” I said almost shouting now.
“Astaris was a good man, I’m truly sorry for you.” He said sympathetically. But then his face changed to a look of anger. “But the time for mourning is over! The time for action is now!” Torrin yelled.
“What do you have in mind?” I asked quizzically
“Our scouts have spotted a goblin encampment. I’ve sent you a map of where these bastards are hiding. Me and my men will storm their little hell hole! Will you help my friend?” he asked calming down a bit.
“Yes of coarse. I want to get back at these bastards as well. You can count on me. I’ll bring as many of my men as I can but tell me, where are we to meet?” I asked
“I have sent a messenger falcon your way. It contains a map of the goblin’s camp and of our meeting place. I wish I could tell you more my friend but I must depart. Until we meet again.” Torrin said and just like that his face disappeared from the mirror. Now only my face remained. My short brown hair messed up, and my blue eyes were blood shot. I stood up and the fog wafted thru the air like a blanket over the world. I wasn't surprised by this. Something about the discharge of the mirror effected the air around it. The fog now lifting I saw the door and took my leave
Now wanting nothing more than sleep I groggily went to my room for some rest. It had been a long day. And I had know doubt that tomorrow would be just the same.
Jesus christ. Are you guys happy now. Its not even like I'm that good anyway. lol
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Post by BloodMoonWolf on Oct 19, 2006 18:46:23 GMT -5
Ok there you go. Not like any one has yet but I updated this post in the last 10 seconds from the time I posted it. So yea if you read it before than congratz you can super read XD
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Post by dogonda on Oct 19, 2006 18:49:12 GMT -5
yess i am happy, is this based of the GSG, it seems bloody familiar
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