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Post by lanaia74 on Jun 7, 2007 3:29:21 GMT -5
Everyday, I visit the places, where we went together It is becoming like an obsessive vigil One I cannot control, making my heart like tough leather Losing my life's partner, is like swallowing a very bitter pill. I do this everyday, because it is my way of feeling closer to you When you left, I felt like my heart had been ripped away Now it is so hard to smile, since I am so sad and blue This vigil I have to do each and every day. I was holding your hand, as you took your last breath That day is one, I will never forget I watched as your life force faded away, then you held hands with death When that occurred, by a rock I felt I had been hit. The vigil, I partake of, helps me with my loss We were friends and partners, we were husband and wife Death, what a hand, to me it did toss You were my soul mate, the love of my life. I blame no one because you left me Death is an inevitable part of life I hope and pray, your soul is happy and free But death within my heart implanted a painful knife. So, my everyday vigil will probably continue, until I reunite with you When you were here, my life was so complete But when death took you from me, my chances for happiness were very few So I live for the day, the day that again, we will one day meet.
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Post by me on Jun 7, 2007 12:28:14 GMT -5
Another poem...dang, your unstoppable!
I really can't complain about anything so...Nice job!
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Post by Uesugi on Jun 9, 2007 2:40:27 GMT -5
Nice love poem. Feels a bit like prose in some places. But very good, as all your work usually is.
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