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Jun 3, 2007 4:25:21 GMT -5
Post by lanaia74 on Jun 3, 2007 4:25:21 GMT -5
I am very aware of what has happened to me A poison, a toxin, runs within my veins I really wish I didn't know, the love of my life, would poison me I can't move, it's like I am dead, in this state will I remain? The darkness that engulfs me is everywhere I smell the awful moist dirt Everyone thinks, now I reside in death's unknown lair Into a grave, my body, you did insert. No one will ever suspect what you did to me Everyone thought you loved me, including myself But the poison you used, my body can't move, but in my mind, saying hear my plea But soon death will offer me all it's wealth I know I am in some kind of box Then I hear the earth falling, as you cover me I guess you think, everyone you can out fox For my stupidity, I will pay a tremendous fee. I trusted you, really thought you cared But your act, you are good, you even fooled me Everyone said we made a stunning pair But now with all my wealth, a wealthy person you shall be. I hope in time some figures out what you did to me The darkness around me, is becoming heavy now On my chest, it feels like it's smothering me I feel like I'm floating, looking down on myself, I know no one will ever hear my plea.
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Jun 3, 2007 4:32:07 GMT -5
Post by me on Jun 3, 2007 4:32:07 GMT -5
Wow this is pretty good, though sorta saddening. Though that's the effect you were angling for so!
Good job!
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