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Post by me on Nov 21, 2006 21:42:54 GMT -5
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 21:50:29 GMT -5
A Guard wandered about a small area. He was glad to get this job. Nice quiet outdoors areas for him to patrol. Nothing ever happened to him on his watch, but he still got paid! Best deal ever. But life is a harsh mistress when someone thinks this, a dagger wound deep into his skull showed this, as his life blood gushed onto the pavement stones. The second guard walked slowly down a well lit walkway. He had more caution then his fellows, always checking the shadows, yet never his back. He lay with his throat cut and ankle slashed. His blood went down the cracks in the stones like little rivers, going down the slight slope, right towards the next guard. The third guard's mouth was covered as a dagger plunged deep into his back five times, cutting off his life.
Here you go. The first story. ^_^
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Post by me on Nov 21, 2006 21:52:12 GMT -5
so you are restarting this.... well its good!!!
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 21:55:44 GMT -5
Thanks. ^_^ I need the praise.
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Post by uesugi on Nov 21, 2006 21:55:55 GMT -5
Ah, a bit more violent than the original... People who start reading this will get confused though <_<
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 21:57:13 GMT -5
Yep. I wanted to kill those guards for fun.
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 22:15:07 GMT -5
Garrett held his recent prize in his hand. The Blood Line Opal. Hmmm. Should fetch a fair price. He thought as he walked towards Black Alley.
Small, but I'm working on what I should do next.
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Post by me on Nov 21, 2006 22:15:48 GMT -5
its ok it involves his master trade
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 22:34:08 GMT -5
The Hammerite machines steamed and groaned as they worked and moved to do what ever they were built to do. Harsh, scratchy breathing came from a cell. A zombie was in there. It's haunted eyes looked at the Hammerite priest as he walked around the room. Garrett gripped the doors lever and pulled down. The Hammerite turned and stared with horror as the juggernaut of evil ran at him and hit his head. The sickeningly loud snap brought another Priest into the room. "Foul undead! Feel the Builder's wrath!" He screamed as he launched a fiery spelled at the Zombie. It struck the evil undead, but it was uneffective......
Ok sized and lets you meet the undead. >=D
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Post by uesugi on Nov 21, 2006 22:35:41 GMT -5
Ah, the story keeps getting better and better...
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 22:36:30 GMT -5
The undead are really hard to kill in this world.
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Post by uesugi on Nov 21, 2006 22:37:28 GMT -5
That's good to know... It'll keep the story entertaining and heart-pounding.
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 22:39:23 GMT -5
I had five chasing me once. Nothing to kill them with.
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Post by uesugi on Nov 21, 2006 22:40:04 GMT -5
Ouch. that sucks.
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Post by OGRenderence on Nov 21, 2006 22:45:23 GMT -5
No I just lead them into my Hammerite friends and ran away. Then came back with the equipment I needed.
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