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Post by me on Mar 21, 2007 16:22:27 GMT -5
B!
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Post by DEATH97 on Mar 21, 2007 16:23:49 GMT -5
A- They need to fortify their position, then we can break out the heavy weapons with a vengeance if need be. Mwahahahaha!
Nice update!
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Post by Dagothkitty on Mar 22, 2007 15:26:08 GMT -5
B!
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Post by Raistlin on Mar 27, 2007 14:39:43 GMT -5
Uh, Raistlin I've been writing a crapload. I updated Death's Workshop a while back, and already have 2 posts in Seas of Gold and Rivers of Blood and my Gears of War fanficBut this ones' my favorite. Fall back and hold the fort! (A)
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Mar 31, 2007 19:08:49 GMT -5
There appears to be a tie. Someone needs to vote in order for me to continue this great story. I know you guys are anxious for my next update. The sooner the tie is broken, the sooner I can write the next part.
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Post by me on Mar 31, 2007 19:11:35 GMT -5
Death...B is fortify position
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Post by DEATH97 on Apr 1, 2007 5:52:14 GMT -5
Yes but Zeus says... "Alright, well we have two choices. Either we run for the control tower to hold a more fortified position. Or we stay here and use our heavy weapons."
I voted for A, because the Tower is better suited for their needs.
does it break the tie, if my sock puppet votes too? what do you say Mr Hat? A looks like the best choice Mr. Garrison.
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Apr 22, 2007 1:20:32 GMT -5
I'm going with choice A.
"Screw this!" yelled Joka as he stood up and fired wildly into the enemies. Blaster fire flew all around him, but he kept on shooting, scoring chest and headshots. Gear tossed a flash grenade to scramble the droids' sensors. He got up and took a few down with controlled bursts from his deece.
"To the tower! Now!" ordered Zeus. He and his men sprinted for the control tower. The droids, now operating normally, opened fire on the fleeing commandos.
Gear reached the doors first and immediately began to hack the computer panel. Seconds later the doors parted and the commandos stepped in, enemy laser shots staining the walls black and red.
"What now, sir?" asked Miner.
"Joka, Miner barricade this door. Gear go upstairs and use the AA gun to thin the enemy ranks. I'll take up a sniper position on the roof," Zeus said. His men saluted. He and Gear ran to the elevator and rode to the very top where the Anti-Aircraft gun controls were. Gear stepped out and sat down in the seat. Zeus rode the lift to the very top of the building and stepped out of the lift when he reached the roof.
Miner and Joka were busy on the ground floor heaving heavy objects against the doors and frying the computer pane. They could hear the droids shooting at the building. Explosions impacted against the outside and created small craters. The droids were so focused on breaking through the door that they hadn't noticed the AA gun up top start to move.
Gear sat behind the controls looking for targets. He spotted some droids trying to enter the freighter and decided to give them an explosive present. He pulled the trigger and sent two AA missiles soaring towards the droids and incinerating them. More droids were entering through the doorway to the landing pad. Gear lined up the reticle and squeezed the the trigger. Missiles exploded amongst the enemy ranks like a deadly surge of hail. Shrapnel and fire cut through the ranks, destroying all droids caught in the blast. The commando continued to send missile after missile at the droids.
Zeus crouched behind some power generators on the roof. He had the sniper attachment on his deece and was picking off any droids that escaped Gear's range. There was about thirty droids left that were within the AA gun's field of fire. He emptied his sniper clip, leaving five droids without heads, and reloaded. Scanning the battlefield, he took down five more.
Down on the bottom floor Miner and Joka had their hands full. The batle droids were still throwing explosives at the door. A super battle droid lay inside a hole in the wall that it had created right before it succumbed to a full clip of ammo to the face. Joka now hid behind the deceased droid tossing grenades and firing his gun. Miner was beside him connecting frag and sonic grenades together.
"What the hell are you doing?" asked Joka.
"What do you think? I'm making a bomb to take out all those damn droids. Done. Keep 'em down while I chuck it out there," said Miner.
"Gotcha," said Joka as he stood up and emptied his clip into the droids dumb enough to stand in the open. He roared with fury, mirroring some godly, white-armored warrior of old.
"Get your head down!" yelled Miner. He tossed the cluster of grenades outside and pressed himself flat to the ground. A deafening boom was heard and the ground it self shook. Joka got onto his knees to survey the results of the explosion. No more than twenty feet away was a giant crater surrounded by charred metal pieces of droids.
"Good job men. Get ready to move out," said Zeus over the com.
Zeus stood up and ran to the elevator. He had seen the explosion and felt it as well. Some droid parts managed to fly all the way up to the top of the tower. He kicked them out of his way and entered the lift. It began to move and stopped on the floor where Gear was waiting. They rode to the bottom floor and exited the elevator.
The lobby was a mess. Half the lights were blown due to richoceting laser fire and every surface was covered with scorch marks. Zeus spotted the arge hole in the wall and saw the fried super battle droid laying there.
"Anyone have a briliant plan?" asked Joka.
"Well, the way I see it we have three options," said Zeus. "We can stay here and draw the droids in the city to us."
"That's insane!" shouted Miner.
"Or we could take the fight to the streets," continued Zeus.
"What about civilians? There would be hundreds of casualties," protested Gear.
"Or we could just make run for it and kill whatever jumps in front of us. So what do you guys want to do?" said Zeus completely calm.
A- Lure the droids to the tower and fight B- Take the fight to the streets C- Make a run for it
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Post by me on Apr 22, 2007 1:26:54 GMT -5
A@!
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Post by Raistlin on Apr 22, 2007 12:53:20 GMT -5
C sounds like fun.
Good writing, I like the cluster grenade idea.
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Apr 29, 2007 18:21:03 GMT -5
Need more votes. Come on guys.
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Post by Dagothkitty on Apr 29, 2007 18:59:16 GMT -5
C.
I love it.
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Mar 25, 2008 16:45:10 GMT -5
How the hell did this die? Doesn't matter now though since I bringing it back from the dead. WHOOT! Here we go with choice C.
"Commandos, form up. We're getting the hell outta here," said Zeus over the comms. They took up a defensive formation with Zeus leading, followed by Gear, with Miner behind him, and Joka covering the rear.
"Everyone switch to your Deece, full auto. Miner use your anti-armor rounds. You're are anti-super droid," ordered Zeus. His men complied, following his orders to the letter. He quickly took the sniper attachment off his DC-17 and replaced it with the assault rifle variant loaded with a fresh clip.
Together the Republic Commandos moved across the warzone the landing zone had begun. Hundreds of mechanical limbs lay all around mixed in with the debris from explosions and the wreckage from the still burning bridge of the cargo ship that had brought them to Dantooine.
They passed the charred remains of droids, those still moving were left to rust. There was no point of finishing them off to end their suffering when there was none to be had. And what little data could be obtained from there memory units would already be known to the Separatists.
The commandos reached the durasteel doors that led to the inside of the landing zone where passengers would go through processing and could arrange for a ride to pick them up. The doors were still raised after the reinforcements of droids had entered.
Gear peered in, gave the all clear, and Zeus went in first with his DC-17 raised. Inside the building was spacious and cool. This would have been where the passengers and them would have retrieved their cargo and then been off on their way. Unfortunately the driods had found out about the Republic troops onboard, and the place had been abandoned.
The belongings of many people rested where they had left them upon seeing the droids enter through the main doors of the building that led in from the streets of the city. Zeus squatted down and picked up a pict-slate with the image of an old couple smiling and holding a brand new baby in their arms. His squad fanned out around them, checking rooms and hallways for droids or Trandoshan mercs.
"Found something," voxed Joka. "Over here guys."
Zeus set the slate down and joined his squad. Joka and the others were standing in front of the door that led down into the employee garage below the building.
"Hmmm, maybe we could commodere some transportation down there?" asked Gear.
"Why not? The faster we get out of here the better. Everyone down the stairs double-time," ordered Zeus.
"Yes, sir!" his squad replied as Gear pushed the door open. He was halfway down the stairs with Miner behind him when the first explosion went off.
Twenty feet of the row of double-doors leading to the streets exploded in a hailstorm of glass and hunks of stone as a droid tank opened fire with its main cannon.
"Shit!" cursed Joka.
"Go go go!" yelled Zeus.
The commandos ran down the stairs, taking them two to three at a time until they arrived in the garage.
Gear was the first one down and voxed back what he saw as he scanned the garage for suitable vehicles.
"Well, we've got access to two sport speeders with seats for two," he said.
"I call one!" said Joka with delight even though a tank was after them.
"Or we could take a cargo truck," said Gear plainly.
"Speed or defense?" said Miner. "What do you think Zeus? It's your call."
Choice A. Take the two sport speeders Choice B. Pile into the cargo truck
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Post by Dagothkitty on Mar 25, 2008 21:02:40 GMT -5
Obviously B
One mistake:
You're are
To You are
Everything else looks good.
BTW, did you ever play the Republic Commando for the Xbox?
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Post by Khornate Marksman on Mar 26, 2008 14:09:22 GMT -5
Yeah, I played the game and loved it. I've also read both books(which are amazing). Those are what inspired me to write this. I'm a Star Wars fan and my favorite part of Stars Wars were the Republic Commandos.
Does the game work on Xbox 360 yet?
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