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Post by me on Dec 23, 2006 18:52:08 GMT -5
He said he had problems with writing conversations...oh nevremind.
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Post by Raistlin on Dec 23, 2006 19:36:27 GMT -5
OH yeah
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Post by Abaddon on Dec 24, 2006 19:02:37 GMT -5
Chapter 5: Bar Fight {Thats Right ;D} Postscript: If you are offended, sorry. There's a pickup line and a rejection in this chapter.This is For Arya. Maelin entered his room and unpacked. This room was to serve as a temporary base of operations. To most it had what a room needed: A bed, drawers, and table. To an assassin or a thief it had what was required: a window and a place to blend in. Maelin unpacked. He changed clothes, put away his armor and weapons, maps and charts. He put on a burlap vest, blacksmith pants, and shoes. He strapped Penance to his hip and began searching for information. Maelin walked down with his hands in his pockets. He casually walked into Ander's. Inside there was a lot of activity. He walked up to the counter and sat down next to a Nord. He ordered a drink, a sapsarilla. {C wut i did Thar?} Gnorm, who was drunk as ever, asked a nearby waitress "How about you and I head back to my place? " The waitress, curled her lip in disgust and said "How would like to have your balls cut off?" She was walking off when He grabbed her wrist with a hand the size of a ham. "Thats cute" He said. She tried to grip free, but he held firm. "Let go!" She said, begging. Maelin stood up and said "I believe the lady said let go." Gnorm laughed and backhanded Maelin, who was sent sprawling to the ground. He wiped the blood away from his lip with his wrist. The room went silent. He picked up a wine bottle and broke it over Gnorm's blonde haired dome. He went limp and bumped his head on a stool on his way to the ground. All of Bar patrons stood up. Maelin noticed for the first time that everyone in the bar was a nord. Maelin dropped the wine bottle, then curled is fingers into fists. This was gonna be messy.
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Post by me on Dec 25, 2006 2:43:53 GMT -5
LOL
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Post by Raistlin on Dec 25, 2006 19:38:00 GMT -5
this is soooooooooooo amazing. keep it coming!
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Post by Abaddon on Dec 27, 2006 15:48:38 GMT -5
Bar Fight part 2
Maelin assessed the situation.He was armed with a dagger, against perhaps a dozen armed nords.He was in an enclosed space and to top it all off, he was in a drinking establishment, so no fireball. However, he doubted the Nords were sober.
The first one charged. He threw a sloppy left hook, which Maelin ducked and retaliated with an uppercut. The nord hit the ground, snoring.
They closed in. A Nord grabbed Maelin from behind. He flipped over him and him on the head with a nearby beer mug. Maelin picked up a bar stool and broke an advancing attacker's kneecaps. He swung it into someone's nose and then threw it, knocking some poor sap over.
A drunken nord lept into the fray. He managed to landing a blow on Maelin's cheek before Maelin punching him in the throat. Maelin climbed on the bar counter and kicked a face in. He dove behind the counter when the nords started throwing bottles. He army-crawled past scared waitresses and the mortified owner.
He grabbed a bottle on the ground and stood up.Evading Bottles, Maelin threw a bottle into a mass of nords which triggered a "Hey!Who threw that bottle? It was you!". The poor nord dived at one of his comrades and soon it turned into a brawl. Maelin walked past the brawl outside where he told a guard about the fight. Within the hour, The Nords were sent to prison til tommorrow. Maelin walked away, whistling.
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Post by me on Dec 27, 2006 19:44:06 GMT -5
LOLOLOL
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Post by Raistlin on Dec 30, 2006 8:02:21 GMT -5
From the link you made, abbadon.
Thinking With The Wrong Head (Hiro Rule) No matter what she's accused of doing or how mysterious her origins are, the hero will always be ready to fight to the death for any girl he met three seconds ago.
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Post by me on Dec 30, 2006 10:49:50 GMT -5
OH LOL!!!!
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Post by Abaddon on Dec 31, 2006 20:59:21 GMT -5
OOC:Actually Raist. Maelin told her to let go and he smacked Maelin Chapter 7:Alchohol Poisoning Maelin went back to his room and thought his plan over. He would go back tomorrow and initiate plan B. First though, a nap to clear his senses. Maelin woke up and looked out the window. Morning. He stood up,pocketed a small vial of crushed chokeberry. He dressed casually again and strolled to the bar. Thankfully, When he walked in no one recognized him. He was a generic Wood elf. Again, he sat down next Gnorm. Swallowing, He said "Sorry for yesterday.It was uncalled for. I was having a horrible day. Let me buy you drink to make up for it. " Gnorm sat up and eyed Maelin. He smiled heartily and said "Fine, I accept your offer. I'll have a Rootpulp Ale." Maelin beckoned to the Bartender and Said "You heard the man.Get me a Rootpulp Ale." He drew the vial from his pocket. The Bartender returned with an Mug and placed it on the table. Maelin, with a quick sleigh of hand, emptied the small vial's contents into the ale. He smiled at Gnorm and walked out of bar. *********************************** Reena stood up and followed the wood elf out the door.
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Post by me on Dec 31, 2006 21:11:05 GMT -5
HAH that guy is dead...DEAD!!!
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 1, 2007 15:48:22 GMT -5
Reena? that sounds familar, you meen Renee? arya would know. And whats that? "this is for arya" what about me? how did you know i liked it anyway? Oh, yes, about the story. It is great. I think you should change the name of maelins sword though....
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Post by Abaddon on Jan 1, 2007 22:03:40 GMT -5
i meant the warning that the chapter would be offensive to Arya. That why i posted it.
Which Sword? Penance or Pandemonium?
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Post by Dagothkitty on Jan 1, 2007 23:50:56 GMT -5
You can't guess?!
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Post by Abaddon on Jan 5, 2007 20:29:37 GMT -5
Chapter eight: Family ties.
Maelin left the bar quickly and turned a corner. He ducked into an alleyway and headed left. He studied this route before. At the end was a drainpipe he could climb, walk along the roof and be in his hotel room. ********************************* Reena quickened her pace to keep up with him. It was important to stay close but not too close. She followed him down an alley and turned left, behind him. ********************************* Maelin ran down a corner, then stopped and waited. As Reena ran to catch up with him she turned a corner, only to find Maelin around thirty feet away. The dirt crunched under shoes as she ran to him.
Maelin waved a finger. Reena couldn't move. Maelin had bound her to where she stood using the earth to grip her leather shoes.
"Why did you follow me?" Maelin asked coldly, not yet facing her.
Reena struggled to move, but her feet remained stuck.
"I wanted to thank you for killing that man for me, after he gripped my wrist yesterday." She said,looking at her feet.
Maelin turned to face her. He was astonished. Not her outfit, Which was a Ander's Ales Waitress uniform, but her face, which was like looking in a mirror.
"What was your name?" He asked, trying to keep his voice level.
"Er, Reena, Reena Straightarrow." She replied.
Maelin's features cracked a little but he quickly regained composure.
He waved away the dirt that kept her from moving.
"Remove your left shoe." He ordered.
She complied, revealing the Straightarrow coat of arms.Maelin had an identical one on his left ankle.Maelin gasped.
He stammered "This is odd to say but... you are my relative of some sort."
She focused on his face then looked at a nearby puddle. Back to Maelin's face and back to the puddle.
Her eyes widened. "Cousin Maelin?" She asked.
Maelin nodded.
"We had better sit down for this." He said.
Reena walked over to him and sat down.He began his story of woe and death, ending with why he had killed Gnorm.
Reena looked at him and said "Let me come with you."
Ooc:Plot twist!
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